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Only my opinion but it appears the dialogue is written by a man as it seems to have only a man's perspective in the comments. In order to really make it legit, get some female input. There are plenty of cool ladies on here that would help. I could think of Anna-mwf as a good option. Please! Stay away from Josetta (the whack job). Good start! Keep going with it.
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